Diya Joshi
The overall impression is disappointing. A simpler, more considered approach would help. I would look elsewhere.
The overall impression is disappointing. A simpler, more considered approach would help. I would look elsewhere.
The overall impression is disappointing. I would need to see substantial improvements.
This is exactly the kind of style I like. It is an easy favourite for my personal style.
This looks like a thoughtful choice. A few small refinements could make it even better.
A pleasant option with a few minor reservations. A few small refinements could make it even better.
The details could use more attention. A few details keep it from feeling well considered. Not my first choice.