Sana Basu
The overall presentation is okay. The style is straightforward rather than distinctive.
The overall presentation is okay. The style is straightforward rather than distinctive.
This seems well considered overall. A few small refinements could make it even better. I would give it serious consideration.
It is not quite what I had in mind. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. There is room for a better overall impression.
There are a few things to like, but the overall impression is underwhelming. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. There is room for a better overall impression.