Vihaan Rao
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
The overall presentation is okay. Some of the details appeal to me more than others.
This seems well considered overall. It would be high on my shortlist. I would give it serious consideration.
A good overall impression. It would be high on my shortlist. The overall impression is favourable.
I do not see enough value here. A simpler, more considered approach would help. It would be a pass for me.