Mira Joshi
This would not be my choice again. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
This would not be my choice again. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
I would consider other options first. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. I would keep comparing options.
The overall presentation is okay. The style is straightforward rather than distinctive.
The overall presentation is okay. There is enough to like, though a few details could improve.
There are a few things to like, but the overall impression is underwhelming. The overall style may suit others better. I would keep comparing options.
It is not quite what I had in mind. The overall style may suit others better. There is room for a better overall impression.