Kabir Malhotra
There are positives and negatives here. The presentation could be a little more consistent.
There are positives and negatives here. The presentation could be a little more consistent.
The details could use more attention. The overall style may suit others better. Not my first choice.
The details come together nicely. A few small refinements could make it even better. A little room to improve, but mostly positive.
The overall impression is disappointing. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
A promising idea with room for improvement. A few details keep it from feeling well considered. Not my first choice.
I wanted to like this more than I do. More attention to the finishing details would help. I would keep comparing options.