Diya Bose
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The presentation feels unfinished.
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The presentation feels unfinished.
The details could use more attention. The overall style may suit others better. I would keep comparing options.
My overall impression is neutral. The presentation could be a little more consistent. Worth comparing with a few alternatives.
It is not quite what I had in mind. More attention to the finishing details would help.