Mira Das
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.
Overall, this falls well short of what I was hoping for. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
The details could use more attention. I would prefer a simpler overall look. I would keep comparing options.
I am very impressed by the overall look. I especially like the balanced presentation. Very positive overall.
The simple presentation is a highlight for me. The presentation feels clear and thoughtfully put together. This would be near the top of my shortlist.